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PostSubject: please help me with English   Thu Jul 16, 2009 8:42 pm

Regards

I have formed booklet about products of our company for English-speaking countries.
I want to ask you to value its intelligibility please.

filename: turnstile_rus.pdf It is ~350kB

If you have little free time, see it and say Your opinion please. All that is there written understandable with standpoint of the language?

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PostSubject: Re: please help me with English   Thu Jul 16, 2009 11:54 pm

Hi
I can find no fault in your PDF it sounds good and convincing
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PostSubject: Re: please help me with English   Fri Jul 17, 2009 12:40 am

Stu, thanks
I felt insecurity
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PostSubject: Re: please help me with English   Fri Jul 17, 2009 12:09 pm

as stu mentioned, it is all self explainatory and understandable for an equally good innovative product.
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PostSubject: Re: please help me with English   Sat Jul 18, 2009 3:54 pm

hey Bstr.. i find it very nicely done.. if anything, some of the images are a little blurred which can be taken care off at the time of conversion to PDF from the source document..

nice product too.. all the best
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PostSubject: Re: please help me with English   Sat Jul 18, 2009 4:01 pm

Hi Bstr,

It all looks good except the uneven spacing around the "/" signs here Exclamation :

Page3
Power failure/ emergency:Exclamation



Page4
hardware operation
card list/database management
data import /export Exclamation
events storing & loading
personnel / events reports generating
Exclamation




As you are maintaining UK English throughout

Page4
use authorised and unauthorised instead of authorized and unauthorized

Visual verification with optional PERCo-SL02 single-user
software enables to prevent use of authorized access
cards by unauthorized persons.




On the cover, you use "IP-based", while inside you use "IP based", without a hyphen.
I would suggest that you use "IP-based" throughout


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supports EM-Marin standart I think this should be "standard"


Page4
Visual verification with optional PERCo-SL02 single-user
software enables to prevent use of authorized access
cards by unauthorized persons.

should read
Visual verification with optional PERCo-SL02 single-user
software prevents the misuse of authorised access
cards by unauthorised persons.





This all I could find till now,
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PostSubject: Re: please help me with English   Sun Jul 19, 2009 3:01 am

Hi Guys,
Many thanks to everyone

I have time to use your advices.
I am going to set it in type this week only.


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PostSubject: Re: please help me with English   Sun Jul 19, 2009 3:06 am

@tomlai

Wow what an eye you have and I can only say you are correct in all .I did not even see that authorized and unauthorized

Its back to Skool 4 me
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