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Bstr
Newbie Loganizer!
Number of posts : 43
Age : 53
City, Country : Russia
LOGAN Model : Privilege
ClubLogan Points : 27
Registration date : 2008-06-17
|  Subject: please help me with English  Thu Jul 16, 2009 8:42 pm | |
| Regards I have formed booklet about products of our company for English-speaking countries. I want to ask you to value its intelligibility please. filename: turnstile_rus.pdf It is ~350kB If you have little free time, see it and say Your opinion please. All that is there written understandable with standpoint of the language? Thank you.  | |
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martin245
Super Loganizer
Number of posts : 2502
Age : 71
City, Country : Karlsbad Spielberg Germany Some do not like the way I answer posts .but if you read between the lines you will see sense in what I write
LOGAN Model : DACIA LOGAN 14mpi Lauriette Simply Red
ClubLogan Points : 2090
Registration date : 2008-04-07
| | Subject: Re: please help me with English Thu Jul 16, 2009 11:54 pm | |
| Hi
I can find no fault in your PDF it sounds good and convincing
StU | |
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Bstr
Newbie Loganizer!
Number of posts : 43
Age : 53
City, Country : Russia
LOGAN Model : Privilege
ClubLogan Points : 27
Registration date : 2008-06-17
| | Subject: Re: please help me with English Fri Jul 17, 2009 12:40 am | |
| Stu, thanks
I felt insecurity | |
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Mir...
Super Loganizer
Number of posts : 659
Age : 47
City, Country : Ahmedabad, Gujarat
LOGAN Model : 1.4 GLX
ClubLogan Points : 624
Registration date : 2009-03-10
| | Subject: Re: please help me with English Fri Jul 17, 2009 12:09 pm | |
| as stu mentioned, it is all self explainatory and understandable for an equally good innovative product. | |
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Logan_loverinDelhi
Super Loganizer
Number of posts : 360
Age : 47
City, Country : New Delhi, India
LOGAN Model : 1.6GLX
ClubLogan Points : 135
Registration date : 2008-07-22
| | Subject: Re: please help me with English Sat Jul 18, 2009 3:54 pm | |
| hey Bstr.. i find it very nicely done.. if anything, some of the images are a little blurred which can be taken care off at the time of conversion to PDF from the source document..
nice product too.. all the best | |
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tomlai
Super Loganizer
Number of posts : 380
Age : 58
City, Country : Kolkata
LOGAN Model : Logan GLE 1.4
ClubLogan Points : 152
Registration date : 2008-03-25
| | Subject: Re: please help me with English Sat Jul 18, 2009 4:01 pm | |
| Hi Bstr, It all looks good except the uneven spacing around the "/" signs here  : Page3Power failure/ emergency:
Page4
hardware operation
card list/database management
data import /export
events storing & loading
personnel / events reports generating
As you are maintaining UK English throughoutPage4use authorised and unauthorised instead of authorized and unauthorizedVisual verification with optional PERCo-SL02 single-user
software enables to prevent use of authorized access
cards by unauthorized persons.
On the cover, you use "IP-based", while inside you use "IP based", without a hyphen. I would suggest that you use "IP-based" throughoutPage4 supports EM-Marin standart I think this should be "standard" Page4 Visual verification with optional PERCo-SL02 single-user
software enables to prevent use of authorized access
cards by unauthorized persons.
should readVisual verification with optional PERCo-SL02 single-user
software prevents the misuse of authorised access
cards by unauthorised persons. This all I could find till now, Cheers Tom | |
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Bstr
Newbie Loganizer!
Number of posts : 43
Age : 53
City, Country : Russia
LOGAN Model : Privilege
ClubLogan Points : 27
Registration date : 2008-06-17
| | Subject: Re: please help me with English Sun Jul 19, 2009 3:01 am | |
| Hi Guys,
Many thanks to everyone
I have time to use your advices.
I am going to set it in type this week only.
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martin245
Super Loganizer
Number of posts : 2502
Age : 71
City, Country : Karlsbad Spielberg Germany Some do not like the way I answer posts .but if you read between the lines you will see sense in what I write
LOGAN Model : DACIA LOGAN 14mpi Lauriette Simply Red
ClubLogan Points : 2090
Registration date : 2008-04-07
| | Subject: Re: please help me with English Sun Jul 19, 2009 3:06 am | |
| @ tomlaiWow what an eye you have and I can only say you are correct in all .I did not even see that authorized and unauthorized Its back to Skool 4 me | |
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